 purple x pen 2008-01-12 . chapter 1oh my, this is really sad, i despise bullying as much as you do, we have NO right to make ANYBODY feel they dont have a right to being themselves, its monsterous and cruel.
im sorry about your loss but here's to making the world a better place, one person at a time, and even though we can try our best and not have any affect on people, try anyway! cheers!
btw, regarding the actual poem: i love the extended metaphor of the flower you've used, very well written =) |
 Ivy Shoelaces 2007-07-12 . chapter 1This poem nearly brought me to tears. A senior died this year in my school; he shot himself (they say it was an accident), and his sister saw him do it. It shook my school. We celebrated his birthday, and at the graduation, his sister accepted his diploma. Death hurts everyone, even the people who were unaware of the person at first. I am deeply sorry for your loss. |
 Emily 2007-07-08 . chapter 1 OMG i love it! This is beautiful, just like Kristina was.
U conveyed the emotions and details of what she went through in a poetic sense. And it came across perfectly.
Alot of people reading this won't entirely get the full effect of this because they didn't know her like I did. To bully someone that was as sweet and beautiful as she was is just sick and wrong and no one should be so mean that they lead another to take their life.
Thank u so much for writing this. U'll never know how much it means. I really miss Kristina man. |
 Emily 2007-07-08 . chapter 1 That was good and that is sad she died so young. |
 Heroh 2007-07-08 . chapter 1After reading this, I must first say that I am truly sorry for your friend. And I can understand how you feel, because in this little town in NJ I've heard of someone committing suicide because he was bullied.. an honor student who was also a great baseball player. Your poem was well written (for some reason, I like the part about the weeds a lot..) And your poem had me near tears because it reminded me of that guy.. |
 je suis une pomme du terre. 2007-07-08 . chapter 1Beautiful, love, beautiful!
I'm sure if she could see this, she'd be moved to tears.
[[R.I.P., little flower.]]
Hopefully this poem and others like it can help change the weeds, hm? Maybe someday they'll stop leeching off such beautiful flowers and become their own.
~~>T.H. |
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