I like those lines:

"I can’t hold on to you anymore but

That’s only because you left me behind"

it sounds so true. and the whole song is cool.

I love this. Full of emotion. I'm not a big fan of songs but this is an exception. I'm curious to know the tune of this. Great job!

-C.N

"I can’t hold on to you anymore but

That’s only because you left me behind"

I absolutely adore these lines! I'm not a fan of songs usually, but this exceeded my expectations. Nice job handling the anger in this - and as a song, how would it be sung? I'm curious as to what the music would be like!

-Cristina