I like the ending a lot.. and the descriptions are great

the lovely inertia and the pretty words. i like this; the last line had that wonderful impact that last lines sometimes should have.

the first time i read it, i was immediately struck by the beauty of it. the next time around, i got the meaning. but i just like to step back and absorb how you put everything together. you do have some of the best titles here, i'll add.