That was touching and heartbreaking. You captured the emotion so well. It is hard, and you really showed how hard it is to go through those things. I loved the end. There's still a happy ending. A bittersweet end. It was perfect.

I absolutely adore what you have written. I could feel everything that you described in the ut-most detail, even if I had never actually been through it. The point: AWESOME!!

Aw... that's so sweet and so sad. Good job.

- T.L.P. (The Lost Phantom)