Reviews for Utterly Deceptive Twaddle Speak

Reviews For: Utterly Deceptive Twaddle Speak

Floggerdye 2008-03-30 ch 1,	abuseHah! I love Lily... :) Out of the fifty-fifty chance, I'd say I'm liking it so far. (By the way, I love your user name! ^_^)
Written 2008-02-29 ch 4,	abuseEep! this chapter was very cute. and mushy. and yeah. can't wait to read more :) I LOVE lolcats. they are way too good. thank you for reminding me of them! I'll have to check out the new pictures.
Written 2008-02-29 ch 3,	abuseI know what you mean about getting a lot of hits but not that many reviews :( thats how it was when I first started too. these days I get about 1 review for every 40 hits, which still isn't that good! I guess we just have to work towards these things... ugh. This kyle guy has potential... can't wait to see what happens next!
Written 2008-02-29 ch 2,	abuseI feel pretty is a GREAT song. I love it :) her friends are so lively! thanks for providing a funny read for me on my sick day :)
Written 2008-02-29 ch 1,	abuseooh, cute story! seems like it will be funny :)
reallyinnocent2007 2008-02-18 ch 4,	abusenice story. i know how u feel bout the reviews. neway. i would make this longer, but my head isn't in the right place and i cant think straight right now.
Sara Frisch 2008-02-17 ch 1,	abuseInteresting. And I mean that in the best possible way, not the "I can't think of anything else to say that would be polite" way. It really is interesting. The only complaint I have is that you could use more of the "show, don't tell" technique. Basically, instead of simply describing things, settings, and people, try to convey them more through the narrator's thoughts and actions. You do this, I just think you could exaggerate it a little more. Anyway, you clearly have a significant amount of writing skill, so keep writing!
TheNarglesWillEatYou 2008-02-16 ch 4,	abuseme likey! so, she's kinda famous, but not really?
MuzikalWriter 2007-08-21 ch 2,	abuseOh my goodness West Side Story lyrics. Anyway, moving on. You have a very quirky sense of humor, and it makes your story very fun to read! I love Lily, he's like some gay friends I have, what with all the "Honey"s and stuff. The only thing I can say that's wrong with it is that there are a few typos. But we're all human, so meh. Ok, on to the next chapter!
Potions Mistress 89 2007-07-16 ch 3,	abuseM…pizza…. A love that won’t abandon a girl. It’ll just go straight to their hips… and because sometimes, even when he’s speaking idiot, Liam is right. those are classic lines. Great job on this chapter.
Potions Mistress 89 2007-07-16 ch 2,	abuseHeHe. If i were a guy guy, i would so do that to my friends. And i like how you say it's weird having straight male friends in your room, cuz i feel the same. I don't think any of my smf have ever been in my room, but i have had a gay one or two (or at least i'm guessing their gay and just haven't come out of the closet yet, because they are just about as flamboyant as Lily.) in it. Anyway i look forward to reading more.
Potions Mistress 89 2007-07-16 ch 1,	abuseHm. Interesting. I like Lily already. Maybe it has something to do with him being "a flamboyantly gay hair stylist". I don't know. Good work so far, and keep at it.
HJWynne 2007-07-14 ch 3,	abuseReview mngering works on me, because I myself monger for the sacred reviews! Anyway, this is hilarious! It's a bit fast paced (in a good way), but sometimes it gets confusing as to who everyone is . . . That could also be because I'm lysdexic and accidentally skip parts when I read . . . Yeah, probably the latter. Anyway, keep it up because this might be the only romance story I ever read. ~The "Freaking" Quill Lady
vaudeville summers 2007-07-08 ch 1,	abuseShe's such a quirky character! I like it - it's compelling - please add more soon ;D ~deanna

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