It's been a while since you've posted something! I'm a little surprised. You had a nice rhyme set with this one and while the flow chopped a bit, here and there, it went very well into the final lines when it closed. This seems to be a common topic in you poetry but I think you do it pretty well ^^!
It's an okay poem, but the metre's off; I understand a one syllable deviation every now and then, but this was all over the place. Of course, it's just a collection of couplets and not a sonnet, but it'd flow so much better if you didn't mess with the flow of the poem.