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Reviews For: So Hard to Let Go
LeoOsaka 2007-07-11 . chapter 1
It's been a while since you've posted something! I'm a little surprised. You had a nice rhyme set with this one and while the flow chopped a bit, here and there, it went very well into the final lines when it closed. This seems to be a common topic in you poetry but I think you do it pretty well ^^!
antigonelives 2007-07-08 . chapter 1
It's an okay poem, but the metre's off; I understand a one syllable deviation every now and then, but this was all over the place. Of course, it's just a collection of couplets and not a sonnet, but it'd flow so much better if you didn't mess with the flow of the poem.

Or try freeverse.
Tumanator 2007-07-08 . chapter 1
It fits, all the questions only some answers, pain but understaning. Been there too by the way, it's smooth and i like smooth. Keep it up.
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