"Master Shawn" creeps me out. a lot. I really liked this chapter, even if you didn't.

The plot is interesting, i really like the style of your writing! Seems like there's going to be a good background story for each character, particularly Shawn and Ian. :fave:

interesting. You're a great writer, please update this soon.

Oh, you finally wrote something. I've been watching and waiting.

Anyway, read the prologue. (weird word, that one!) It's very good too. I like the plotline so far, and the small summery I read looked good as well. This Rebecca, I want to learn about her. I look forward to more.
Night Silver's Whisper