In terms of your tenses, I'm thinking that this might work better:

the sunlight refrats off the water that’s soaking your skin
turning you into a thousand fragmented rainbows
that bend and break to make you beautiful

Otherwise the piece is almost too fast paced. Aside from that I really like this simplicity here. If you looked at doing something else like this though I'd try to vivid it up a bit more.

Midnight

aw, the imagery is really nice like a magic feeling.

This is too short. It's like a teaser. I mean, that was probably the point.. to just kind of grab you and then stop. But I wish there was more! =)

this is really sweet :) but i do think that you might need some commas or something? to make it easier to follow. i know i had to read the first line a few times to get it.

or perhaps, that is a technique or you did this on purpose to make it look less complicated?

not sure, but good job! :)

that is a beautiful image
it makes me want to believe that everyone is just a drop of water, a tear from the sky

remember when everyone used to review each others' work?
oh man, were those the days