This was good. I think you could have worded things differently to make it a bit more scary because in the beginning it was kind of funny. It was great though. Could you please read and review my story: That boy on a bike? I need some input on it. Thanks.

Until Always,
A-xx

This literally startled me when I read the line about someone walking towards her from the wreck. You forgot an apostrophe in cars in that same line. Other than that, this is a good piece.

Odd, I just wish you'd have written more, it's short and leaves no conclussion which i guess is good for the mystery part. I only saw one error and it was just some missing quotes.