This piece flows very smoothly and it is beautiful.

omg this is so beautiful! is it just me or is it true that we can seldom find this kind of beautiful writing on this site? cuz i feel like there is such lack of real poetry until i come by your page again. and im quite shamed to say that i definitely haven't written anything quarter as good as yours.
=summerdazed=

I'm so glad you're writing again! Or posting again, whatever the case is. Great work. :)

*cries softly* That was truly beautiful sweetling. Thank you.