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wordsworth in a garbage can 2007-07-19 . chapter 1
i'm very sorry to hear about your cat. i recently lost my beloved dog- so i'm very sorry, and i sort of understand what you must feel like. animals have the trump cards to humans anyday. this was a very sweet, tender piece. the only thing i may recommend is going back through and checking for spelling, grammatical errors- but other than that. you convey what you're going through very well. and once again, i'm sorry. keep writing.
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