You have great grammar. I couldn't find any mistakes. And the story was quite good, although personally it should be in fanfiction dot net.

Keep writing and update Sapphire Eyes! :]

Beautiful story. I like the twist.

Wow. I really enjoyed this. I love how you weaved fairy lore and Cinderella together. I also like how you wrote this as an old-fashioned fairy tale.
In a few places, the grammar is a little wrong. Like this:
“If ever thee needs my assistance for any reason, the birds will know where to find me.” He told her.
should be this:
“If ever thee needs my assistance for any reason, the birds will know where to find me,” he told her.

I hope you do more fairy tale re-tellings in the future.

Beautiful.

This was a wonderful idea. I love this and it was really unique. There were a few errors but they weren't that big of a deal and there were only like 2 so...great job. Could you read my story: That boy on a bike? I need input on it and want to know what you think. I would really appreciate it. Thanks.

Until Always,
A-xx