well, this is one of my first times on fictionpress...mostly i'm a fanfiction gal. but anyway, your story. awesome. so freakin' cool. i started it last night and only stopped when i fell asleep at my computer. totally serious. so i finally finished it and love it. it's so nice to find stories with good grammar...especially when they've got good plots as well. just one thing, though, about the ending... why?!?! -ahem- as in, why did it have to end? did jem make it in their world? did they get married? gah! he just turned around and walked away! did he even kiss her? i don't think he did. why not?! agh!

er, anyway...thanks for writing it! lol

Wow I can't believe I hadn't reviewed the end yet. I love this story! Although the ending seems oddly sad. The tone I mean. I'm not sure why. Anyway I enjoyed this story very much! You're a great writer! ~ Ryn

...EE!! Oh that rocks so much!

I figured he'd do that.

:) CD

god

...wow. Just wow. As many fantasy novels as I've read, I didn't expect that. I must be tired :D
I loved it--the whole novel, from first word to last. amazing...that's all I can say. Thanks!

It's kinda sad how you find these really good stories on Fiction Press, but not a lot of people read it. The sister site, however, is another story.

So far, it's not bad! Let's see how the reast of it goes...

The end of this chapter gave me shivers. it was sad as well...Awesome job. I really liked it...
It seems like this novel went by so fast. I'm sad that it's starting to end, too!
Ashe

Aw crap, now I'll feel like a plagiarizer when I have to write my version...

:D CD

The last section reminds me of something... XD

Sweet.

:) CD

Aw he wants to marry her. NO she can't leave him! Unless Paul Gels is somehow Jem's counterpart. Hey, if Bryn doesn't want Jem, I'll take him! lol! This is a GREAT story. I can't wait to read more! ~ Ryn

:) I kinda guessed that would happen, but still...I love how--to me, at least--it seemed so quick and sudden. Love the chapter...update soon, pleace?

...this world rocks -so- much... *sigh*

It's cool.

:) CD

Cool. Like starfish--I like that. And wings that don't work--I like that, too, since most wings in stories actually work...That's cool. Update soon, pleade...Can't wait to see what happens next!

yep. Definite irony going on there. I like this chapter, and I can't wait to see what happens next. I thought I spotted a spelling error, but now that I look I can't find it. Oh well. Whatever. :D

Aw...The end of that chapter was great. :'( Can't wait to see what happebns next.