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| abba12 2007-07-29 ch 1,  | abuseyeah, it does hurt... |
| TheUnknownMarauder 2007-07-17 ch 1, | abuseHmph... You stole my line. But I bet I know where that's from... Anyways, you already know what I think about your haiku-writing. But I would just like to tell you, your coding for "Alisu-chan" is all wrong. |
| Basara 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abusetrue true true... we get little in what we want... nice! |
| xDancingintheRainx 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abuseI like this. So true. The author's note at the end added a lovely touch to this piece. Well done! |
| Ekoaleko 2007-07-10 ch 1, | abuseThat's pretty good, considering haikus are extremely short and have a limited amount of syllables you're allowed to use so your point must be really quick. In this case, your point is vague and general. What's your heart's desire, really? Lol, I can't say it was brilliant, amazing, and earth shattering, but it was good. |
| Stella-Polaris 2007-07-10 ch 1, | abuse3 words: I LOVE IT |
| deadrosepetals 2007-07-09 ch 1, | abuseSo true. I liked it. |
| Cam Flynn 2007-07-09 ch 1, | abuseThat's so...sweet, actually. ^^ I like that a lot. I don't usually like poetry, either. So many poets out there write something, and everyone is like "that's so professional" but it's just like crap. This is, to me, professional. I may still be 'amature' myself, but I know good poetry when I see it. There's talent hiding in your words. ^^ |