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| AfterPartyFiasco 2008-05-13 ch 1,  | abuseAw...you made me frown towards the end of the poem. How dare you. Lol. :( The ending was disappointing in the sense that it was a 'a-happily-ever-after' kind of thing. =) Being the romantic that I am, I love happy endings, but I still like this poem because it's realistic and full of emotions. Uhm...I guess that's all I have to say. Lol. =D |
| Mosaic Stains 2007-07-15 ch 1, | abuseI have to admit between the first one I read 'Games' and this one, I like this one better. It has a silent poignancy that stands out and gives the words a forward and nicely evocative feeling, expression. I don't really see it as angst, but instead as passively powerful. Still I like the title, and I suppose it is in a sense angst-like, considering the emotions you felt while writing it. ~M.S. |