you express complex ideas so well.
the cycle of love and hate is so well expressed, im at a loss for words =]

It's a very meaningful story, explains a lot about life. I like how it's very short, but important and impacting.

that was amazing.
its short, but powerful.

very poignant... I think the cycle is something that I can't really relate to, but I can sympathize with...

wow - very powerful, very twisted, and VERY well written. I think you made everything PERFECT, especially the last line. You have an amazing flair for writing... You've put, in a nutshell, what some people could attempt to express by writing an entire book. AMAZING!