Reviews for Internet Attraction

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Oracle of Destiny 2008-02-20 ch 2,	abuseI just have to say I REALLY love this chapter and it's brilliantly written :) Firstly I really like Collen's best friend as Taylor is the type of girl who loves to have fun and enjoys life to the full. I liked the way Taylor teases her about Andy at the start of the chapter. I would do that if I were her :) But yeah I think despite Collen's childhood (especially her mother) Taylor is protective of her and in my opinion she's the type of girl who would listen to a friend and tries to offer them some advice. By the way I loved the abbreivations such as BGFL and SWBF - that was interesting to say the least :) And I can tell that Collen does care for Taylor after her heartbreak, they really are best friends. I can see where Taylor is coming from about the dangers of meeting Andy in real life as you don't know if they are who they say they are. I liked the story about how they met on the dating site and it does sound realistic xD The chat between Collen and Andy is entertaining and I liked the way she appears not to be interested in him even though she is. Hmm, I'd say that Andy is quite mysterious yet flirtatious at the same time. I think it makes a change rather than seeing them instantly fall in love with eachother the moment they speak. Excellent work with this :)
Oracle of Destiny 2008-02-20 ch 1,	abuseHmm, this is such a good opening chapter and I really enjoyed it xD I liked the way you described her background and where she comes from. I can tell right away that she is intelligant and she is obviously mature for her age. Some of the things that she says is true as most girls act like slags and sleep with other girl's boyfriends and some of the people at school act friendly when in fact they are actually fake. I feel sorry for her childhood and upbringing though and I think I know why she rebelled in her old school. It's because she didn't feel loved at home by her parents. But yeah, Andy does sound like a nice and decent guy and I want to know how did they meet and other things like that. I can understand her opinion on him being her little secret because when you fall in love with someone online you tend to keep it to yourself. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Bellla 2007-11-15 ch 5, anon.	abuseohmyjesus. this story is addiciting. question though, does the shirtless cowboy have anything to do with the story? or was that just a one time thing?
Pop the Bubble 2007-11-05 ch 5,	abusebleh bleh update! dont drag the story on too much though, it'll lose its gorgeousness =D
TuttiFruttiOXOX 2007-10-31 ch 5,	abuseAH. Come on, post post post!! PLEASE post. It's so good. I was thinking that perhaps the cowboy was Andy ... but ... maybe not. I have a guy friend named Andy ... >.> Um yeah ... so it was kind of weird since like, my Andy liked me and Coll's Andy likes her and ... Oh, merlin ... I'm bad at reviewing apparently... Kat
bobbychu 2007-10-30 ch 5,	abusecute and when was the first time she met the cowboy man?
Sin Girl7 2007-10-30 ch 5,	abuseI WANT TO SEE ANDY! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
Sin Girl7 2007-10-30 ch 4,	abuseCowboy is Andy? I'm desperate to see Andy here!
Sin Girl7 2007-10-30 ch 3,	abuseGood chapter ;)
Sin Girl7 2007-10-30 ch 2,	abuseI loved their chat :)
Sin Girl7 2007-10-30 ch 1,	abusethe prologue seemed fine ;)
Halani 2007-10-30 ch 5,	abuseBADDA BUM BUM!! Yes I am hyper. I've had a coke, pespi (pepsi for all ya'll that didn't know) and candy. Yum! ANYWAY... Do I review this? I forget... But if I don't here's my first review! And if I do it's my fifth or fourth or something... This was really good. I like Andy =D I can't wait for more! Awesomely wonderbah (my new word) as always! -Halani
TuttiFruttiOXOX 2007-10-30 ch 2,	abusewow ... sounds ... actually, it sounds very interesting. I like it. can't wait to read the rest!! keep posting, girlie! Kat
afterloop 2007-10-21 ch 4, anon.	abuseCMON UPDATE! MORE MORE MORE. andy is so so so sweet lah!i cant wait for you rnext update alrdy :D
Altlover172 2007-10-21 ch 4,	abuseI really really like it!! I'm excited for your next update! 8D

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