This was really good! Seriously, it sounds like some big drama movie that you see at the Oscars. Add more soon!

Great, I loved it.Update soon

ahh!! gotta have more!! that was so good!

Keep writing,
Katie

Good story! I like how the characters are more than they seem to be, and how you understand them just enough to want to know more about them. I also think it's great that Jordan and Nicholas also seem to dislike each other from the start... It's a nice change from all those stories where one part of the couple instantly dislikes the other part, and the other instantly likes the first one. You have a nice, kind of intense writing style too. Great work! (Methinks you deserve more reviews!)

I love it still. But I do have to say I wish it was longer. The chapters and story line are so intence that when they end so quickly it becomes alittle disappointing. I do understand though that it'ds hard to do so no big problem. Your Still my top Favorite story right now. Keep up the googd work.

too lazy to log in...me bored...good chapter...me surprised that i'm not trying to type in french...me ust got done studying for french class like 5 mins ago...ugh...

What else is there to say. I LOVE It. Hurry up with the next one please I'm dieing to see what happens. LOl

I love it. I think it has a lot of character. Question though, How old is jordan? Anyway keep writing.

This was really good, it seems like something that could really happen. I wrote a story with a similar theme too but your's honestly seems more realistic! Add more soon.

You go girl!... a publishing friend of mine in Montreal always said..."write about what you know and you will never go wrong!" ...Hopefully your "Worst Nightmare" will be your "Greatest Gift"...maybe wishful thinking...but whre will we be without our dreams?...lol...time will tell!

Keep going...life works out the way it should...and so do your stories...life will be exeptional for you...and publishing too!...XO...D

Sorry I'm so late to review! I like it. Jordan needs an attitude adjustment, though, and I think that Nicholas will be good for her. And yes, isn't it frustrating when you have several pages written out on paper, but it's only a couple pages typed up? *Sigh* I sympathize with you. Anyways... good story, awesome characters, great job overall! -Qzie

Glug.. *Slaps Nicholas* Sorry, dude, sorry.. I don't think I like you either.

Anyway, it's keeping me interested. Too bad Cassidy's not too much in here. Not only do I like her, I adore her name.

Oh my... this seems much more promising then i thought at first!! You already got me hooked!!

There's one tiny bit i didn't get. It's when Nicholas tells Jordan to not talk to his mom like that... but the only thing she says at the table is "Sorry I'm late"... and, even though she's not sorry at all, it doesn't seem ofensive. Is there some hidden meaning or did i get something wrong?

Still, i really like the way you write. It's... i guess pretty suits it fine. Keep it up!

Hm... nice start, it seems to be interesting.

I like the detail about Scott being humming before the conversation with Jordan, but not afterwards.

My first impressions so far are:
Jordan as emo rebel; Scott as modern dad; Cassidy: golden girl.

Up to next chapter xD

Well, at first the 'lol' bothered me, but then when I saw it was a computer thingy it didn't bother me so much anymore...so I guess it was kind of pointless to write that it bothered me, but oh well.

So yes. Good start, I'm curious about how this meeting will go and what it will further reveal about Jordan's character. She sounds fiesty and pretty amusing, even if the story is tragedy/drama.

so yes, I look forward to chapter 2!

-Megan :)