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| EmptynessFilled 2007-07-29 ch 1,  | abuseYou know I'm not exactly sure what the message is here. I mean, I understand the message about the tendencies of the human race, but it just ends goofily with the lawnmower line and your author's note. Maybe it's the fact that i just can't get a movie scene out of my mind. From the movie Dead Alive, there are a whole bunch of zombies that get run over by the lawnmower-wielding hero. Do a youtube searcg and you'll understand why I just thought the poem was goofy. |
| Ashelin 2007-07-10 ch 1, | abuseI kind of found this really sick. Unless I'm totally stupid and missing the point. You wrote it well, I still find it odd though. |