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| spiderfly 2008-01-07 ch 1,  | abuseI think you write very well. I honestly think that this poem would have been more engaging for me if you had not explained the doctor/vampire relationship in the introduction. If I hadn't known that already, it would have been just that little bit more obscure, that little bit more interesting as I try to work it out. But really good job. |
| JustAlice 2007-09-29 ch 1, | abuse... STOP BEING SO GOOD AT THIS! (Mutters childishly) You make me jealous. (Sticks out tongue) So NEH. They were beautiful when he smiled; a love-bite turned violent. I like that bit especially- very cool. And I thought the idea of using a Doctor as a metaphor for a vampire was cool. Peace Out Cranberry Envelopes |
| Kaitlyn J. Richards 2007-08-08 ch 1, | abuseGood work. It flows well. I like it. |
| Ariel of Wonderland 2007-07-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is great. I love it. |