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| Lynn 2008-10-10 ch 14, anon. | abusehey! good story! But I was wondering...will you continue this? I think u should you are a very good writer...and I really want to know what's going to happen XD |
| KH.Lee 2008-09-23 ch 14,  | abuseAhh, I have had no time to Read or Review and for that, I am sorry. I love your story, somehow it always seems to make me smile... Even If I haven't read it in forever. Great Job. Update Soon! |
| Mel 2008-08-07 ch 14, anon. | abusei've never reviewed before but i just wanted to say this story is very good! update ASAP! |
| L3le'ArO 2008-08-02 ch 14, | abuseu im ur 110 reviewer yay ok enough cukuness wow love it love it love it i cant explain ryan is by far myy fave characther i do not want her with devon id like her to get with todd i want to see his softer side again plis and i wanna know more bout brad i feel sorry for brad hes reminds me of my friend pablo aw anyways lan well we dont know much bout him if i could learn more bout brad and lan i would be extremly happy now to you wow mega great story im not one to read storys like this one always go for the classic *sigh*cliche eing the hopeless romantic i am but well spea the noise tlked great of ur strys and u being her beta they had to b good so yea u have a hell of an imagination this story is great i love it and now u have becomed one of my fave authors and u know wat i want an update nd well thats sll for now love lele |
| Jenn 2008-07-18 ch 14, anon. | abuseglad to hear that my review made you write :) This story is so cool Dany and Dev...aw sounds so sweet! I cannot wait to see what happens next |
| Carmel March 2008-07-11 ch 14, | abuseThis story just continues to amaze me. I love every bit of it! I hope to read more soon :) ~Carm~ |
| GrannyP 2008-07-09 ch 14, | abuseThat was pretty creepy at the end. I don't know about the song lyrics though. I usually just skip over them. It's hard to convey how good someone sound when singing just by putting the lyrics. Maybe you could say more about how she actually sounded or looked while she sang? Or what they were thinking while she sang? I dunno. Just an idea. So good luck with future writing! |
| -Danariana- 2008-07-09 ch 14, | abuseThe chapter is finally up! wooho!! I was so happy when I read it :D (I'm still happy lol) I LOVE every bit of it! The karaoke bar idea was just too great :D I can't wait to read more :) |
| xemeraldeyesx 2008-07-09 ch 14, | abuseerr, is it Todd? he's being an ** :( sorry i suck at guessing. aww dany and dev! so cute!! |
| Rynx-too-genki 2008-07-09 ch 14, | abuseOMG! A STALKER! Sounds scary! > |
| Jenn 2008-07-08 ch 13, anon. | abusehey, it's been a while since you last updated! I do like this story, so I'll be looking foward to reading it again update soon :P |
| Carmel March 2008-06-21 ch 13, | abuseEven though it's been a bit since I've read this story (which I'm so terribly sorry for), I immediately got right into the story line, the characters, everything. I love this :) Keep up the great work! ~Carm~ |
| atreyu love 2008-06-07 ch 3, | abuseI LOVE THE STORY:) and damn, shes popular with hot guys. wish i were :D haha. |
| -Danariana- 2008-05-30 ch 13, anon. | abuse100! |
| Ash 2008-05-30 ch 13, anon. | abuseI luv this story! keep up the great work :) |