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| Rayne 2008-04-24 ch 7, anon. | abuseReally made me cry on this chapter. |
| nomy 2008-01-05 ch 9,  | abusei dont know what happen when i read this ..but i feel sad..like the feeling of sadness that conquers my mind..i dont know how AJ die..cause i think that it is an accidental overdose rite? but i dont know cause you never did write it out ..i hate that type of subtly.. but i just want to curse out aloud..seriously, thats how much your story make me feel so freaking sad and just i dont know?depressed maybe?..the ending kinda make me more sad and depressed..you should put this under angst cause it make me depressed(again?)... .. actually there a point that im confused, so AJ keep haunting Peter because nobody knows their relationship and the fact that his death is incidental rite?..but i thought atleast Octavia or Harry atleast has a clue rite? make it clear for me ..cause i feel i love your story but i cant put my mind to actually escape the sadness of the story to understand.. you have an amazing story anyway..youve done a great job on it! ^_~ |
| red-headed psychopaths want... 2007-10-08 ch 9, | abuseAw...I can't believe it's over! I loved it! ^.^ |
| red-headed psychopaths want... 2007-09-30 ch 8, | abusewow...way to go! ^.^ Keep up the great work! |
| jjwitdaheydiddydiddy 2007-09-05 ch 8, | abuseI really enjoyed your story... it's sad, bitter, but just sweet enough. It's well-written, and the dates weren't hard to follow at all--in fact, I like how it jumps around. It's a pretty realistic take on the grieving process. I... can't help but wonder, and I'm probably reading too much into things (I do that a lot)... but are you a fall out boy fan by any chance? |
| Artemis Anderson 2007-08-26 ch 1, | abuseInteresting prologue d:) |
| Esquirella 2007-08-13 ch 5, | abuseThis looks like a repeat chapter. |
| Esquirella 2007-08-09 ch 4, | abuseCool plot. |
| Rosey Prosey 2007-08-08 ch 3, | abuse^_^ I really enjoy your writing style. It's very proffessional and still unique. I'll have to keep up with this one... |
| tia-blue 2007-08-05 ch 3, | abuseHoly crap I love this story. The mood is perfect and I really have no idea what will happen next. PLEASE update so that I can continue to read/reveiw/worship Go Away, AJ |
| red-headed psychopaths want... 2007-07-31 ch 2, | abuseI love it! Great work! This chapter was incredibly good...I'm sorry I took so long to read it. ^.^ Keep it up! |
| Linear Flower 2007-07-16 ch 2, | abuseThis is beautiful! Can't wait for more. I would have posted this on LJ, where I found the story, but this works too. :D |
| Asitha 2007-07-16 ch 2, | abuseThis is quite interesting. I'm very curious to see where it goes from here. Definitely adding to my story alert! |
| red-headed psychopaths want... 2007-07-11 ch 1, | abuseI love it! It's a great beginning and I hope you continue it. The idea is great, though it has been used many times, and I'm sure you can make something great out of it. Great work! ^.^ |