hm... i'm not sure about this. its almost seems like you are trying to say something, but not a lot of emotion seems to come across...

I like this poem, i can really relate to it. The feeling of being invisable is really one to make you feel lonely

oh, and thankyou for the comment ^^

x

Blueberry-Butterfly

Your poem is very realistic, touching and delightful. I think everyone can be a little shy at times, so your poem is definately a must-read!