lol, i think this story will get better the more chapters you write. thats how it was with your other story (the first one i reviewed)

plus, you need the reviews!

anywho, keep it up (or do better), and update soon.

i think that the more you develop the story line, the better the chapters get, so hurry up and write more!

raely

i think this is the only review so far

this story deserves a review

so...review!

anyways, i like the plot a lot so far.
the line: Hate is only love on fire. is verry deep, and true. kinda.

anyways, i guess ill read chapter 2