Wonderful. I want to know what happens next. ISo much the I went Ahh at the end of the chapter cause there wasn't more.

really cute! =]
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you spelled cabbage wrong

I liked this chapter. I didn't get bored at all :-D.
I didnt like the whole.. "aint" multiple times in the beggining and then it was not said at all.. those kind of vocal inflections would be said constantly... if he was even into saying aint :-D.
i like the little twist at the end. keep it up and i cant wait for a new chapter :-D
ps: im always looking for co-authors. :-D If you feel like seeing if we can scheme something up let me know :D

Good start, looking forward to an update