Again, it's the common folk who take the advice who are the wise, but anyway, this was an excellent piece of work. It sounds like the slightly dysfuntional relationship of adolescent and adult brothers, though I'm not sure whether they really were brothers or friends. Very well done.

Good job!
IT seemed a bit confusing, because yo don't really know their relationship, but that was a really good factor as well. It left a lot to the imagination as to what their relationship in fact is.