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| InuNekoKitsune21 2007-08-10 ch 4, | abuseAW! Makes me want to cry! Poor Seina! *thwacks Servos* The idiot. As much as I love him, the idiot! *thwacks him again* |
| InuNekoKitsune21 2007-08-06 ch 3, | abuseHaha. I love Servos! He's so funny. And yeah...I can see Shykin IS Snape. ^_^ |
| InuNekoKitsune21 2007-08-05 ch 2, | abuseHaha. Servos is very quick-witted, kinda reminds me of Aaron and his sarcasm...just a bit, not by much. |
| InuNekoKitsune21 2007-08-05 ch 1, | abuseWhen I see Servos' name, my mind's eye keeps thinking it's seeing Severus's... It's was cute! |
| maidengarnet 2007-08-02 ch 2, | abuseHey... I read this. No, no, I won't be that cruel ^^ You write well, and I'm interested to see where this is going. Don't stop writing! 'Cause, y'know, I'll do, uh, stuff, if you stop... yeah. |
| Rhea 2007-07-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseExcellent. I like the creativity and development your story shows. There is a lot of potential. However, I would recommend taking a slightly slower pace. Overall, a good start. |