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Reviews For: Return of the Breaker

InuNekoKitsune21
2007-08-10
ch 4,
abuseAW! Makes me want to cry! Poor Seina! *thwacks Servos* The idiot. As much as I love him, the idiot! *thwacks him again*
InuNekoKitsune21
2007-08-06
ch 3,
abuseHaha. I love Servos! He's so funny. And yeah...I can see Shykin IS Snape. ^_^
InuNekoKitsune21
2007-08-05
ch 2,
abuseHaha. Servos is very quick-witted, kinda reminds me of Aaron and his sarcasm...just a bit, not by much.
InuNekoKitsune21
2007-08-05
ch 1,
abuseWhen I see Servos' name, my mind's eye keeps thinking it's seeing Severus's... It's was cute!
maidengarnet
2007-08-02
ch 2,
abuseHey... I read this. No, no, I won't be that cruel ^^ You write well, and I'm interested to see where this is going. Don't stop writing! 'Cause, y'know, I'll do, uh, stuff, if you stop... yeah.
Rhea
2007-07-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseExcellent. I like the creativity and development your story shows. There is a lot of potential. However, I would recommend taking a slightly slower pace. Overall, a good start.
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