Oh my gosh
This is such a good plot, please write more Lala!
Yes...grammatical errors but...I'll let those slide...and the where and were BUT such a wonderful story. I wish you would continue it! Well yeah, it was two years ago but good things never die? xD ?

This story is pretty good. But I think the reason that I'm your first reviewer is because you update to quickly. you c, I noticed that your story was published and u've added 3 chapters in the same day. So just slow down wit the updateing and you should get more reiews. But hey, u don't have to listen to me... do what you want... newho, keep writeing. and this was a good story.
~*~*Till Next Time~*~*
Frostbitten-Angel