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Lerene 2008-10-01 ch 4,	abuseYou must continue this! It's so good! I love how orginal it is. Please, Please, please continue! come on it's been over a year sense the last update. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!
Lerene 2008-10-01 ch 1,	abusethis sounds like it's going to be interesting.
tyedye7272 2007-11-30 ch 4,	abuseHey, here you go, a review. I really like this chapter. I wish she would stop asking herself what she got herself into. I think by now she would have some idea of what that was. Also, Do the shadows have any connection to the fog phantoms in the American Chillers books (read 'em when i was, like, eight. Hated 'em. So not scary)? But yeah, i liked it. I wasn't super psyched about Drek telling her how to use magic. I'm all for a mentor, but i hate it when people give exact instructions of how to use magic in general (of course, it's way more acceptable when it's about just magic instead of when it's about super-powers. That just makes me want to hurl, and spit fire at people at the same time. Huh! I got it, i'll hurl /lava/ at them. Pretty sweet huh?) Sorry, rambling again. But yeah, love it. Peace out, Tye ;P P.S. UPDATE!
tyedye7272 2007-11-30 ch 3,	abuseGulp. Is Vedren a bad guy. I don't want him to be a bad guy. He's, like, my favorite character, and i usually don't like bad guys. DON'T TURN HIM INTO A CRAZED MEGALOMANIAC BENT ON THE DESTRUCTION AND/OR OVERTHROWING OF ALL HUMAN CIVILIZATION! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE DON'T! please! :( Peace out, Tye ;P
tyedye7272 2007-11-29 ch 2,	abuseWow this one is great! I really like it. i don't know why, but for some reason i'm not getting update notices. I guess i'll just add it to story alert again (i might have forgotten to the first time, although i don't think i did.) But yeah, i rwally like it. I review trade btw, in case you're interested. (sorry, i'm desperatelyt desperate for reviews XP ) Peace Out, Tye ;P
Equilibrium 2007-10-16 ch 4,	abuseBrilliant job. I really like the story settings, and the descriptions of all the cool mythical creatures! Nef, in particular, sounds like something i'd like to cuddle. Your works have an almost... Paolini-ish... flair. Do you happen to read Eragon?
tyedye7272 2007-10-11 ch 1,	abuseI like it. It could be better, but i definitely want to keep reading. I used to think that the whole "talks to animals" thing was way over cliched, but it's been so long since it has been used, it's okay to use now. It's like, retro superpowers :P But yeah, i really like it. Oh, and by the way, i was wondering if you did review trades. If you do, I'll be posting a story in the next few weeks that i just started, and I really need sombody to review it. I hope i don't sound to desperate (although i know i do).
rosefaerie 2007-10-04 ch 4,	abuseHey, This is all really good. GREAT JOB! I love all of the mythical stuff... magic... creatures... ooh, it's just fun. Once again, things happened really fast. I have a feeling I do this too - I admit it - but her majic just showed up like she didn't have to work at it or anything. I have done this exact same thing, though. ;) I LOVE Nef. He's so cute. He's a great character and I hope he sticks around for a while! I'd love for you to read and review my stories too! Please do! Yours is exactly the style of writing I like to read. Keep it coming, I look foreward to another chapter! Rosefaerie
rosefaerie 2007-10-04 ch 3,	abuseHi, Once again, good chapter. One question: do shapeshifters only have some shapes they can shift into? Can Vedren only become certain animals? I really like the development of the story, the gauntlets are really cool... I love how you make up all of the names. It's good to have strange sounding names instead of human ones. On to the next chapter, Rosefaerie
rosefaerie 2007-10-04 ch 2,	abuseHi Tyrammafar, Nice action in the beginning... I was a little confused at first at ther werewolf, because he was acting human. Maybe you could say that she noticed something different about it... just a suggestion to clear things up. :) Things happen really fast in the story. I would like to know a little more about a lot of the characters... maybe you could spend a little more time on each development. On to the next chapter, Rosefaerie
rosefaerie 2007-10-04 ch 1,	abuseWow, another great story! Good job again... I like the shape shifter. His personality is perfet, he needed to have strong emotions. On to the next chapter, Rosefaerie
Readers 2007-09-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseHi, A few weeks ago, you PMed the Readers account regarding your story. Please post the same message to the YW101 Yahoo! Group; you'll have more chances of letting people know about your story there. Hope this helps! Regards, Readers
rnsintrepidwriter 2007-08-06 ch 4,	abusePlease, post another chapter. I think it's even better than most of the Eragon fanfics that you write.
Kenna-Kat11 2007-07-14 ch 3,	abusestill going good...this chapter i rather liked a lot because it contained more of the creatures of the city and their strange personalities ( i love comparing different authors views on mythical creatures cuz everyone has a different thought process)...i am beginning to like Drek a lot more too..although Vedren is somewhat shifty...but then again thats his character..Sarah seems nice too although (obviously) very naive to the world of mythical creatures..lol..well i am just gonna go on to the next chapter! (oh and the ending was much better on this chapter) ~E~
Kenna-Kat11 2007-07-14 ch 2,	abusestill very good with the right amount of suspense, decription and side characters... however i suggest that you end this particular chapter in a different way as it is almost exactly the same way you ended the other chapter...a different ending will keep the readers wanting more..rather than simply wondering..if you take me meaning...however i did like the whole potion ordeal you came up with...with the fact that she can speak the native language of the city yet hear as if it were english...it keeps the story balanced yet also with a minor twist that could create more problems/action later...overall good job..i look forward to more ~E~

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