It was really cool how you had the text in different directions. Parts of the font turned out a bit weird though.

I gotta admit, I wasn't very sure when I took a first look at this. But this is a very earnest, heartfelt and genuinely sweet poem. This is how love pieces should be, and this is also how free verse should be. Wonderful.

M...sounds tasty. Good work here, I like.

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