This is a fantastic poem. The way the active plot (the love and barriers between the 2 lovers) varies between the repeated lines *Just one chance
A fleeting glance
Of a life I want
And a change I need
To save this night
And rescue me*

Yeah, I just thought it was great. I'd love to see you do something like this with "A Painful Ending"... (or maybe I might give it a shot... who knows...). I loved the poem though, looking forward to your future posts.

--TheDJ

wow.

"just one chance
A fleeting glance
Of a life I want
And a change I need.."

a.m.a.z.i.n.g
that sent chills down my spine.
great job.

It's unfortunate that text only gives us a black and white portrayal of a colourful world. I mean it was a little confusing, but I get the idea that you had to use the bold, italics and normal for the representations. It was different though.