AWSOME!
so im hoping since im uhh a little behind the posting, that the sequel is up!
i hope

i loved this story...im sad its over
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HEY!...I live in Washington

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...I don't like brad
and i think hes a latent homo

oh i like this so far

I adored this story.
I really liked how you kept it real and in the end they didnt go running off into the sunset, together forever. Kinda bittersweet
And the kiss at the airport was especially touching. I squealed and felt a tear in my eye xD
So, overall YAY and you're an amazing author. (:

Hello! I really enjoyed reading Don't Ask. I think it's a marvelous little story and I think you're a terrific writer. I especially liked how real you kept the situations and all the characters. For example, Belinda is the first female character in a slash story I've ever liked. I'm very impressed with the way you handled her, as well as all the other characters. You're writing has a level of maturity that many other stories like this lack. It was extremely refreshing to read. I'm also thrilled to hear that there is a sequel! I'll be reading that next. Keep up the excellent work! You're a wonderful writer! You've made me fall in love with Ryan and Miles.

- Deana

P.S. Critique-wise, my only wish was that the story was longer. Your plot development is great, I just wish there were more of it. I think certain scenes were a bit rushed, but that's understandable if you're trying to get chapters updated quickly. Perhaps it's something to think about if you ever do a touch of revising. There were also minor typos here and there, but what author isn't cursed with those? ^_^ I love your work! All the best to you.

awesome story! now for the sequal!

Oh my God, this story is too cute. I have to ask, though, when Miles said that he wasn't into girls, Belinda asked him if he was bi? Being bi wouldn't mean that he wasn't into girls, just that he was also into boys.

Thank you for writing this story. It was really nice to read a guy-falls-in-love-with-his-best-friend cliche without the best friend falling in love back (which frankly, never really sat right with me in most of them). I found it a beautiful, heartfelt, and believable story, and I really enjoyed it. Well done!

I loved this story! It was sad when Ryan had to leave but now he is back and I can't wait to read the sequel. Which I am going to do right... NOW!

This story was wonderful.
Mainly I loved the depth of the characters.
If there was a super favorites list, this story would so go on it. C:

That was very, very sweet and well written, although the plot was a bit too simple.

Hey, I really loved this story. A lot better than some of the more "famous" things around fictionpress. Amazing job! ;D

ah..your story is so like sweet and beautiful written...theres a time that i wanted to kill Brad ..and Miles for being an idiot for not telling Ryan..

but you just make a cute story abt best friend that are so much into each other life that they cant just live without the person and not feel satisfied with their life..

i hope at least you make Ryan fall in love with Miles in the next sequel but i dont think you wanted to do that..cause you stated that he is straight isnt he? or he just didnt know what gender of person he is in love with? anyway, i just hope if Ryan cant love Miles at least make Miles love somebody who is worth the love..

still hope that Ryan love Miles..yah i know its like typical love story if you do that but i just love the ending of best friend loving each other..

sorry to write so long but i only write long if i totally inlove with the story..and guess what? i LOVE it! ^_~ and i will be putting you in my alert author for the next story alert of this story!