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lovetowritealways 2008-10-05 ch 22,	abusethis is amazing! i love it! please please please write more!
ukranianmira 2008-10-05 ch 22,	abusei love it and i am ukranian so i love it even more slava is part of my name to so i saw that and i was just like that mean glory
always&forever 2008-05-27 ch 22, anon.	abuseWhat ever happened to the next chapter? I really like this story, its different from all the other ones that I have read. I really hope you post more. If not I will come up wiyj my own ending for myself.
ReadWriteLive 2008-02-09 ch 22,	abuseAn interesting story. However you haven't updated since August, a pity. Hope you finish this.
britty-tt 2008-01-08 ch 22,	abuseI came across this story cause it got nominated for best cliche at skow but I have to say that this is one of the most uncliche cliches that I have ever read. Yeah it has the whole best friends brother thing going on, as well as childhood friends, as well as love/hate relationship. So its pretty much full of cliche but you put your own spin. A really good spin on this story. I'm sick of the cliche that are all about the social circle, high school hierachy. I love stories like this that focus mainly on the main characters. They talk about what affects them, mostly their past. They arent the weak characters in some stories that the worst thing that happens to them is having rumours spread or their crush being stupid and dating some blonde cheerleader. Your story is different. Thats why I like it so much. And thats why you should start writing again! August was your last update...that is way too long ago.
Nerdette 2007-08-30 ch 22,	abuseReally good!
Lady of Confusion 2007-08-28 ch 22,	abuseUPDATE SOON!
Freya 2007-08-28 ch 22,	abuseI'm sure she didn't actually say she was a rabbit and I speak Russian so you can trust me. I Loved the rescue, but I think the Seb/Rayn (I know it's Slava, but I like Rayn more) was solved too quickly. Ida:-)
Oooh.Look.A Cat 2007-08-27 ch 22,	abuseaww all is sort of well :) gotta love it can't wait for the next one! izzie
Meggielu 2007-08-27 ch 22,	abuse104 now, hahahaha! Man, I don't think I even have that many for all of mine put together...but then again, I haven't typed anything for a while. I mostly handwrite stuff...maybe I should put my new one up. I actually finished it :). Ok, rambling, sorry. Sweet, please make Vladimir not be so mad at her. I hate mad characters. It makes me sad. Dark green eyes are HOT. :D Pura Vida, Me
Olivine 2007-08-27 ch 22, anon.	abuseYeah, too lazy to sign in, but the hospital wouldn't just let her out with a burnt hand and bad lungs. She should have gotten instruction at the very least on how to take care of herself. And did the doctors so anything for her besides bandage the hand and but the oxygen mask over her face (which they would have done as soon as she got to an ambulance)? That part is very unrealistic. The way she's acting isn't though, I'm relieved about that. Last chapter, I thought she was so out of character I didn't even want to reply, so I decided to wait until next chapter to see if it was going anywhere that would explain her behavior from the end of last chapter. And this did. And I'm glad. I'm not so sure about Sebastian, though; would the talk really be that short and forgiving? And the kiss happen so soon? That doesn't seem natural. Neither does Vlad's reaction, at least not entirely. It just didn't seem like there was enough depth to his reaction, not that it was wrong or not in character. Just needed more depth. Otherwise, it was fine. The coughing fit at the end should have alerted a nurse who would have come in and started fussing over her, to her disappointment or something, but she wouldn't have been allowed to just walk out there like that. Update soon. Olivine.
Essevera 2007-08-27 ch 22,	abuseHow can you update so quickly? ::eyebrow furrows::
September Sapphire 2007-08-27 ch 22,	abuseYAY! LOVED IT!
Meggielu 2007-08-27 ch 21,	abuseAnd now, the Little Caesar's guy pops up and shouts "Pizza Pizza," in a DEP voice. :) Sorry, that's one of MY nightmares, though I don't remember if I wanted to die or not. It was a long time ago. I think I was TRYING to wake up, but I'm not sure. So she sees the future, eh? Interesting... One grammar error..well, there were more but I can't remember them. You said "to captivated by him." It should be TOO captivated by him, bla bla bla. Oh yeah, and intact is one word, not in tact. Not sure if those were typos or not. So yeah. Pura vida. Meghan
Grape 2007-08-26 ch 21,	abuseI can understand her wanting to know her biological family and everything..and I can understand that her biological mother gave her away because of financial problems..but I can't understand way Rayn would want to just..give up the people that raised her for most of her life..just turn her back on them and never see them again, to me that isn't right at all. Like I said, getting to know them and being friends is fine..but to give up the life you have known forever and disapointing the people that love you just as much? Anywhoo..I LOVE this story!! I can't wait until the next chapter is finished!!

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