Very nice. I like your use of italics and parentheses. The lines:

Wake me

Come save me

(You’ll only save yourself now)

gave me chills.

The ending was brilliant, although I'm not sure I like the repetition of "now". I thought that the italicized sentences and the sentences in parentheses made this piece great. Well done! Thank you so much for the reviews!

haha i honestly thought that was yours

it was really the only good one on there lol

i like it a lot