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| xHUGx 2008-04-08 ch 3, anon. | abusealright, alright, leaving us with a cliffhanger, huh? i need to know what happens ! ohmy, so beautifully dramatic. he can't speak, and he cannot understand what she is saying? what about efforts in trying? how else do they communicate besides their "love" for one another? i'm so very interested, especially the reason to why he had to actually cut Logan's head off. goshers, that must suck for Ivory. but she's gotta stay with him, nah mean? have him chasing her, leave him in torment, but end up together in the end. maybe she leaves him. or someone makes them seperate from each other. he like, tries to speak her language so he can go and find her and redeem their love, or whatever. something exciting. but no death from either of the two, yahear? |
| crazychic7278 2008-02-24 ch 3,  | abuseA great story |
| 15.4 2008-02-17 ch 3, | abuseBEAUTIFUL. beautiful. |
| MeLove 2007-11-10 ch 1, | abuseThis was really quite beautiful writing. I have this...'thing' for animal qualities and I absolutely adored this one! Something more from them would be wonderful *hint hint*! |
| XxXHeartbrokenTearsXxX 2007-10-19 ch 1, | abuseHonestly, I think this story could've lasted a little longer. I like your discriptiveness, and I think that the names are pretty cool sounding. All in all, good story. |
| 122791 2007-08-01 ch 1, anon. | abusefor random this really good! |
| Xx.innocence.xX 2007-07-13 ch 1, | abusei love this... the fact that there are no words adds so much emphasisi! i love it! |
| Bravado Pirate 2007-07-12 ch 1, | abuseIt was very good. Wonderfully written, as well as having an excellent plot. |
| Roundtree 2007-07-12 ch 1, | abuseThis is quite a good story. Can't understand a single word of it, but it is beautifully written. |