It's really confusing with all of the Japanese/manga names...I got confused reading it and really couldn't keep up with all of the characters...but other than that, it's going pretty good.

hahah xD That was hilarious!! keep updating!

It's alright - thought it lacked a touch of description since it was mostly dialogue. Can't say much until there's more...

your chapters are short lol xP anyways please update soon!