People plagiarize things on this site?

That was gorgeous. And I must say, I loved the alliteration. It's by far my favorite literary term :)

I loved it. Amazing, astounding, articulate, an all-time favorite.

-Maggie

wow. beautiful. loved the alliteration, really well done. great contrasts between the characters.

ah, but i love it! :D

wow i really like this =) its very deep and meaningful

i love it. the alliterations were amazing~ :)

I'm speechless.

This was utterly amazing.
How do you do it?!

just downright amazing

Wow, I love these alliterations you used, as well as the contrasts of ideas and tastes of the two characters. It's very beautiful, poetic. Awesome!

I love this one shot, it is SO gorgeous. Also, I love that you know so many words to describe colors. Just so you know, you are my favorite author of Fictionpress!
-Chaos

my god. this was just absolutely beautiful..you are an amazing writer and i can only dream to be as talented as you are and to have the grace with which you string such eloquent words together.

The last paragraph&line are, by far, my favourite.
If I had to choose one line, I think it would be this one:
"...in a tortured tangle of arms and legs, they tend to each other's hurts."

Beautiful. =)

Just finished English one so I now know what alliteration is. hah

What can I say? Positively, Perfectly Poetic. nyahaha.

beautiful =)