This is so pretty! *squeals*

Ah, look what you did, you just reduced the inner me into a valley girl who's full of sweet thoughts and no plans for the future but more dreams!

Hahas. This is really nice.

Just beautiful/.

Wow. This is some of the most gorgeous prose that i've read in a long time... don't curse kendal, because this is a masterpiece.

Erisah

Ah it's brilliant! Very clever, I like it. :D

More alliteration, you hear me say! More!

It was actually quite painful, the repetition of the l's, the a's, the s's. And then you read it again, and you want, *need* more of the 'inky, illustrious indigo.' Bwahaha. D!

Kendal and your um, strange talkings definitely produce some interesting results. xD

That was really .. quite awesome. Loved the wording. :o

i really like this! it's quite poetic )

There is a lot of alliteration, but it works, so I'm all fine with it. And you made her do a deaf POV (The Things You Say), so you two are even. I like the way you used present tense and description, and how it's metaphorical in a way (though I'm not sure if that was intentional).

And the colours - didn't even know so many words for purple existed. Actually, I did, but hopefully you get the meaning of what I'm trying to say.

I'm horrible at giving reviews, and I don't do it much, but I really liked this. It's different and that's an assuredly good thing.

- akeyana

I can see the alliterations. I haven't had the idea to purposely write with techniques in mind in a long time (like when the teacher forced us). Oh and I always thought it's fire and ice...but maybe it's just me.

yum

i love color words and alliteration so i thoroughly enjoyed that

Aww! That's so cute!

i love it.

LOL that was great! and sweet! is the theme something like opposites attracT?

What a beautiful one shot._

The whole 'it's not my colour' kind of reminds me of my fussy friend when she goes out shopping with me, but that's on a more random note!

You really do have a wonderful variety of words! How do you write them so well!

Well that's it from me,

Isabella.x

And you asked for a deaf POV - I'd say we're even.