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Talula Stories
2008-06-27
ch 1,
abuseWow, i really, really loved this, they are so cute! Definetly well done and i really hope you do a sequel! :D
jaded image
2008-06-27
ch 7, anon.
abuseAhh, this was brilliant :D I enjoyed this so much, I can't stop smiling, hahah. Sebastian sounds adorable and those two together is really cute. And you made the whole time traveling romance very believable. I absolutely loved it!
Mikari Maki Chen
2008-06-19
ch 7,
abuselolz.. that was a fabulous short story... xD i loved it. i really hope there will be a sequel.. unless there is one there and i didn't see it...
Pinkamoo
2008-06-16
ch 7,
abuseLoved the story, but I still, don't care what your 'dictator' says, think you should have written more of an ending!
Pinkamoo
2008-06-16
ch 1,
abuseThis. is. SO. Good!
Now I wanna write a future story!
Thankyou, feel great' cos lady, you're inspiring.
Cortney
2008-06-10
ch 7, anon.
abuseI LOVED this story! It was sweet and cute and quirky, which is just how I like my fluff. Plus, Bastian and Reven were both sarcastic, which was nice (I'm pretty acid-tongued myself, so I appreciate it in others). I love your writing style, and the premise of this was just so unique and amazing.

You rock!
cbprice25
2008-05-14
ch 7,
abuseHey! You're the author of Desenchantee! Really enjoyed that one (triste that it's on hiatus).

Anyway, this story had me curling my toes. Very cute. I kind f wanted to see him interacting with some of her friends -- maybe concerned girlfriend who was skeptical about Raven's so called "company."

Anyway, well done! I just "had" to read this all the way through last night (leaving me a measly three hours before I had to get up for work). Not your fault, really, although you do make such procrastination (I tend to put off sleep for as log as I can) easy.

[PS - You've been favourited.]
Carina
2008-05-14
ch 7,
abuseLiked this one too. Nice and quirky. I liked the phrases you'd come up with for Bastian.
Azure xx
2008-05-12
ch 7, anon.
abuseluved it ;)
katieee
2008-05-03
ch 7,
abuseAwhh, I loved him. He was great. :]
katieee
2008-05-03
ch 6,
abuseIm sad, I dont think he's coming back again.
katieee
2008-05-03
ch 5,
abuseAwhh, I loved the ending.
katieee
2008-05-03
ch 4,
abuse:] I like them.
katieee
2008-05-03
ch 3,
abuseLove them together; very much.
katieee
2008-05-03
ch 2,
abuseShe's goingg to sleep with that sweater now. I know I would, if he smelt good. :]
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