 caralita 2007-07-14 . chapter 1i've had days like this (feel better) and you definately have a way with words |
 Spuriously-WoodsWorth 2007-07-14 . chapter 1That is so sad... Did this happen? |
 Professional Dreamer 2007-07-14 . chapter 1Oh. My. God. The picture, scene, that you have built, never quite explaining and yet giving enough for the reader to fill it with every time they've felt like this. Wow. Fantastic. |
 thesarcasticdreamer 2007-07-13 . chapter 1*sigh* I think I remember that day, if I'm thinking of the right day. ((Keep you chin up! *Smiles fondly*
This poem reminds me that we all have our own day to day battles that nobody else always knows about. |
 EmeraldsAndPearls33 2007-07-12 . chapter 1I really like this one, especially, "You say,/'I love you'/and I slam the door/in your face." and "Before my day/has even begun,/it’s my worst day/all year." A poignant piece.
Em ;) |