Nice poem.

Twilight Starr

I love this! The rhyming pattern and the continuity of it is very well put together. It would sound awesome with music to it. Well done!

Another great work ) Love the rhyme scheme, it all flows wonderfully, and I particularly like the repetition of the last line.

This isn't weird at all. I think it's well written. I like the structure of the poem and I think you did well with the rhyming. Great job.