wow. that was beautiful! i loved it. it was such a good read. it was like honey. thanks

Like your writing style, simple and not over emotive

omg i loved it could u make more chapters?o.o

*hugs your story*
It's really tough to find a merman-story that's worth reading, and let me tell you: your story (to my opinion) is beyond just good, it is AMAZING. I loved how simple--no, not simple..."realistic" the story was: none of this overly-dramatic romantic/angsty cheesy-ness that I see almost everywhere. It was well-written, the pace was steady, and it was just downwright adorable, haha :)