Wow, one of my friends came out a few years ago, no problems. Don't see why its such a big deal to some people. Nice envisionment of the response from a typically religious family though.

Lol.

Ha.

Name/rank/number Baxter, I don't think you have to give them your date of birth. Nice concept.

Diary entry? Eh? Strange one.

I like this.

I suppose it could have happened any time.

Cool. Me enjoyed reading this oh great Baxterial one.

Oh

Are parties not meant for stumbling and stupidity? Have I missed the point BaXter?

Wow Baxter, "little botanist baby/growing plants and winning"

You'll never know how much that made me giggle.

Sorry i've not been in touch, moved flat, only just got back online today after 2 months, been hectic.

Will e-mail soon.

Alan/gelina

Wow, very innovative choice for this excercise. And it was also a great metaphor that was well-used from the beginning to the end. Awesome.

Wolfie

This is rather cool, love. I like the begining part, especially the bread crumbs bit. The last stanza confused me a bit, though the ending part was lovely.

Wolfie

Ooh, sneaky. I like how you modernized this, since there obviously weren't cars and cell phones (or even lights, for that matter, lol) back in Revere's time. Cool, cool. Keep writing! :)

I did promise to read these eventually. Today seemed a good day to lose myself in your words... Felicia, darling... Um. Beautiful. All of it. You make me jealous.

It takes a lot of courage to admit your gay, especially if you'll telling someone who is homophobic. I don't think it bothers as many people like it did in the old days. But, I'm sure some people would react like you had set off an atom bomb for telling them that. So, it was a good way of describing the experience.

~SirScott