|Reviews for When the Wheel Slips|
| Twilight Starr 11/3/07 . chapter 1
| Captain-Dalien 7/13/07 . chapter 1
Wow. This is really good. It demands to be read more than once, just so it can all sink in... I love it. Kudos. CD
| Affinity 7/13/07 . chapter 1
This is very cool. It sounds a lot like a song to me.. The ending is awesome, nicely done.