Funny! In a time where the zombies are right on your heals you still noted she was going to report the locked door. Okay I usually do not read books like this but it is to good not to. Please update! Dont leave me hanging! Please and thank you.

I could be wrong but part of me thinks there is something creepy about the new girl. I thought it was intersting how you explained everyone looking at the worker being attacked. I dont think I could stand around while something like that is going on. I would be on the other side of town on my way out of the state.

I thought this disclaimer was funny. This chapter like the first one was full of detail and keep me wanting to read.

Question:

As she got out of the car to go to work how did she already know the city was infected? The mayor did not come on the tv until later in the chapter.

I loved it. It was full of detail and already has me on the edge of my seat.

But I do have one question:
What happened to the people who where in the apartment with her?

please update soon!

Very good start. I'm at the edge of my seat already!

Very Nice. I dug it for the short length of it.
Detailed, weird, and intriguing. Usually I'm un-impressed by zombie stories as they are a bit cliche' but yours was very good!

great job!

~km