wow this is an amazing poem, and i love it, deep and wonderful!

anyway i found just one mistake here: "cr;" is suppose to be "cry;"


but this is a great poem! =]

intresting. good poem

this is beautiful, in a depressing, morbid way.
"Four in the morning; still here, lost and further broken.
On the floor I cr; tears of pain, of anger, and of betrayed hearts..."

i can relate to that ohsowell.
amazing job.

~Black and White Dreams~

This doesn't seem out of the ordinary, but then I really look into the words and they make me feel so much. I can't even really describe it. But you gave me such a beautiful and broken feeling, thank you. Good job.

that was effing amazing! what made you write this? Oh, and you're ok now, right?