Reviews for Jack Olsen: Private Investigator

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Elkica 2008-05-07 ch 1,	abuseThat was just great, the way you build up the tension, the way you put out the little details of their past (acquaintance) relationship. Even Jack’s transformation into the seventeen year old kid and the fact that Brett didn’t recognized him not even when he saw both versions of the same man believable. The only think that you could loose was a beat of ‘my dick thought’. I really enjoyed in this story. Thank you for writing it.
Kyuuketsuki-Yaoi Fan- 2008-04-29 ch 1,	abuseI Love This Story. Its Absolutely Great And I Think Its Cool You Were Able To Write This Story In The Amount Of Words You Did- Most People Would Have Had To Make It A Multi Chapter Story.
The Masked Sentinel 2008-04-29 ch 1,	abuseWow! This is great original Slash.
S. Cherise 2008-04-11 ch 1, anon.	abuseYou're an incredible author- I read the interview a while ago (and just reread it) and I wanted to read more of your work- I love the fact that despite this being a one-shot it didn't seem rushed or lack any details or plot development. This has to be the best one shot I've ever read, no exaggeration.
Lucifer's Retarded Twin Sis... 2008-03-21 ch 1,	abuseThis was ** great! i had fun reading it ^ ^
Daydream Nation 2008-01-27 ch 1,	abuseThat had a cute plot. And entertaining witty dialogue(sp?). I wish I were as witty as that. :D Anyway...I loved the story. Buhbye
Lexy-Kun 2007-12-30 ch 1,	abuseI love this story! It was really great. I love Jack's (well, Ben's) flirty but more importantly witty remarks, and I like how you show that basically, in high school the main trend is set up by the "god". If he thinks homosexuals are disgusting, everybody would say the same. If he thinks homosexuals are cool, nobody would dare to contradict him for fear of being ostracized. I like Brett Nielson, always trying to keep his act as a teacher (in appareances at least) and mostly succeeding while still managing to be flirty with Ben. The plot was interesting, the impression of "deja-vu" lessened by Jack's personality and job, and probably also by the way he sometimes lets his dick do the thinking :p (ps: I love Shakespeare in Love :p a bit too cheesy sometimes, and not historically accurate of course, but great rythm and lot of hints and references, those of which I understood I really enjoyed :p)
nomy 2007-12-25 ch 1,	abuseits funny as hell !! i just cant stop laughing !! its just so funny!! you are one hell of a writer..!! but mind you Shakespeare in Love is a great movie..!! ^_~ p/s: love the ending!! i just cant stop smiling and laughing right now..!
gothicHobbit08 2007-11-15 ch 1,	abuseshudder oh my god. Such a cute ending. :)
Gravilove19 2007-09-29 ch 1,	abusecute I really enjoyed this one. I wish there was more of it. XD
RezBratOnna 2007-09-17 ch 1,	abuseThis was awesome! I really liked Jack's character, and though the setup was kinda corny, I really liked what you did with it. It was detailed enough to keep the story going, and definitely would have been too long if it were continued. This was a really enjoyable read. Fave'd.
Kaerith 2007-08-28 ch 1,	abuseYay! I really liked this one. Brett's reaction when he found Jack at the bar was hilarious. And the lemon at the end was hot.
Nub in Denial 2007-08-26 ch 1,	abuseDude. That was amazing. The structure you used with the lines 'my first mistake' 'my second mistake' and so on gave the story an overall feeling of something being explained for the benefit of someone else. It added a lot to the story considering how he's a detective and narrating his life ought to be done in a detective-ish way. The whole thing felt... right. And I love how his dick talks to him. I have to say those parts were my favorite :P
Kailum 2007-08-25 ch 1,	abuseloved it ^^ good humour as well :D
i-see-faeries 2007-08-06 ch 1,	abuseThat was ... Long, for lack of a better word. Really, really long. Haha. I still loved it though. Every moment of it. xD Definately one of the best I've ever read. And it's so ... nice. ;] Great job.

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