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| nia 2008-01-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseactually i like teh beginning of the story... its interesting... gud luck... keep writing.. |
| I Quoth Nevermore 2008-01-17 ch 3,  | abuseGreat update. Just watch the 'your' and 'you're' uses. And about the mystery guy's looks...hm. How about green eyes with a hint of gold and bronze hair. And maybe freckles on his nose. Yeah, that's what I think. OR! He could have hair that's so black that it has a blue tint, and then his eyes can be gray. I love gray eyes! Okay, that's my second opinion. I hope that's what you're asking for. Anyways, please update soon! |
| animefreakgirl 2008-01-17 ch 3, | abuseHm...it's not that bad and I'm interested in who the mysterious guy is. I would love to read the next chapter when it's up so keep writing. :) |
| I Quoth Nevermore 2008-01-04 ch 2, | abuseGreat update. There was a grammatical error or two, but that's it. I hope you update soon! |
| misery sister 2008-01-04 ch 2, | abuseGreat story so far! Keep it up! :D |
| SecretWhispers 2007-07-14 ch 1, | abuseVery short, but interesting. update. |
| Sincerely- Your Worst Enemy 2007-07-13 ch 1, | abuseHey Energy - This is interesting. SHORT, yes, but interesting. I really was intrigued by this short entry, however, I'm excited to read more! Update soon! This is on alerts, so I'll know when! =) Kay |
| lil.miss.sammi 2007-07-13 ch 1, | abusehey um so did the person writing back to her like steal her diary or something? im so confused haha but its a real good beginnin |
| PeytonE.evans 2007-07-13 ch 1, | abuseVery good beginning...Even it if it IS too short for my taste, you DEFINITLY have got me into the plot, please, continue. :] AWE-ESOME STORY! :O |
| I Quoth Nevermore 2007-07-13 ch 1, | abuseThat's sketch(y). Haha. Love the idea though. Please update soon! The chapters will be longer, right? |
| O-o The Orange Moose o-O 2007-07-13 ch 1, | abuseoh this sounds so interesting; please write more! :3 I really want to read some more of this, it's incredibly intriguing! :3 Please? =P |