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| Sahara Hayden 2007-07-13 ch 1,  | abuseSome of the wording was a bit awkward, particularly in the first paragraph, but I'd like to read more. I don't think it does justice as a one shot. You could definetly add more to it. I really like Erick. He seems like a sweet guy. |
| Alex Dunne 2007-07-13 ch 1, | abuseA couple spelling errors but I'd like to see more ^^ |