BTW- Candy is male? female? Men can wear stillettos (speeled wrong, I'm sure), but it never really SAID for sure what Candy's got between those light legs.

I love this one already! Please find your inspiration, and continue with gusto! I am adding you to fav author and author alert because I love both this story and Fadge like Fudge! Your sarcasm is so fun. Check out my stories- "Paranoia Speedway" and "All I Need and More." I am also going to post another story tonight, yet to be given a title. I will continue to enjoy your stories.

Chaddieboi

This was good. I personally enjoyed the first chapter better because this felt more like an introduction of two new characters more than a chapter. But that isn't bad. Some chapters are going to be like that. Good job still! UPDATE SOON!

=) Kay (And I will go read Upsidedown now...or later. BUT I WILL!)

great story...continue.

It’s not a bad start. There were some issues though, you typical grammar and spelling things.

I also think the part about aids was a little harsh, I mean not all people with aids are **, Just an opinion.

But I did love the last line, it was a nice touch.

At first, I wasn't sure what I was getting myself into when I read the summary, but then after reading this chapter...WOW! I LOVE Candy! *please don't sing the song. Anti-Aaron-Carter* Just everything was very nice. It was casual, but smooth. She's a very good narrator. Very entertaining! This is ALREADY on alerts and favorites, so you BETTER update soon! ^^ heeheehee

=) Kay